Round Three= Mary Moriarty

My thought about One Art is that the way the lines are and how they almost to cut off mid-way through. "so many things seem filled with the intent
to be lost that their loss is no disaster. "
It helps the flow of the piece and makes it intersting to read.

How do you open
a time portal that you find in your backyard
how would it smell and look
if theres not even a date on it.

How do you open
a door to a haunted house
would it creak and skreech
if theres not even hinges on it.

How do you open
an old scar
how much would hurt or bleed
if theres not even a mark

When I read In the Backseat of My Mothers Car  it seemed to pass off a rather dark tone.
"I was calling to you – Daddy! – as we screeched away into
the distance, my own hand tingling like an amputation. "
It sounds like she was being pulled away from him and the way that the lines split the words into and the, it helps set the scene. During I Go Back to May 1937 You learn a lot about her life, like you get the idea that her parents are divorced;
"I want to go up to them and say Stop,
don’t do it—she’s the wrong woman,
he’s the wrong man"
In Fatherland you get the picture that she didn't grow up with her fatehr or at least a father figure;
" the fog of my childhood muddles the fatherless"
In Trackphoto it kind of proves that she's had some problems when it comes to her father;
" Now you are missing,
your urn pushed
into a stone wall
by your youngest son.  "
By reading her work you can learn alot about her life and she portrays that clearly in her peices.

2004 seems to have come and pass

I wish I remembered

this moment with you

I feel like we've grown apart

You're the anchor in my life

And I would be so lost

wihtout you by my side

to lead me through it all

No one can ever replace

I can't wait to gowup and have more memories

with you there with me

to walk me down the aisle

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